- very clear / focused
- very interesting - what's your view? You have also included a lot of theorists buy you should tie it up with your own opinion within the conclusion
- Quality of research is great - make sure you give time frames!
- You utilise a rang of source
- Your referencing is great, you have also used triangulation well and it helps the essay to make sense
- Structured well
- Include further visual case studies
- Watch mad men !
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